Those last 4 chapters ?????? The pacing was all over the place.. the random bath encounter felt forced and the nonce was just kind of shoehorned in as a way to forgive them..? The non-linear storytelling made everything feel rushed too and the lipbalm thing ?? What did they need that many for.. I thought they were gonna use it on their own lips not his
Those last 4 chapters ?????? The pacing was all over the place.. the random bath encounter felt forced and the nonce was just kind of shoehorned in as a way to forgive them..? The non-linear storytelling made everything feel rushed too and the lipbalm thing ?? What did they need that many for.. I thought they were gonna use it on their own lips not his