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The story was good, the art is awsome the only problem was: chapters too short. But now I ...

Stravaganza March 14, 2026 10:52 am

The story was good, the art is awsome the only problem was: chapters too short. But now I don't understand the story anymore. It seems like they just wanted the story to be longer but didn't know how to direct it, so they just did whatever.

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    Butterflew March 14, 2026 10:28 pm

    They are in an FF so imagine the story written by some 13 y old, it will make sense then
    Like how they add every thing and all thing at once, that's what the mushroom is cause they are trapped in her fanfiction