This kind of story really needs some down time to properly process emotions. This one is just go go go, both fast moving AND repetitive for some reason. Like, before there's time to even process the tension of MC escaping he's caught again. And then Heat? No heat. Heat? No heat. Heat?? ...no heat. Was hoping for angst and drama, but I'm mostly just annoyed.
This kind of story really needs some down time to properly process emotions. This one is just go go go, both fast moving AND repetitive for some reason. Like, before there's time to even process the tension of MC escaping he's caught again. And then Heat? No heat. Heat? No heat. Heat?? ...no heat. Was hoping for angst and drama, but I'm mostly just annoyed.