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This was not as good as imagined it would be… it’s actually irritating. For the first ...

Irrational Hater March 16, 2026 10:39 am

This was not as good as imagined it would be… it’s actually irritating. For the first couple, if there was good communication then it would’ve been an amazing short story, instead it was a long winded bs story that left me unsatisfied. And for the second couple, it fell short bc the plot was there, but it focused too much on sex. It was never explained why seme had to be a gigolo and go on all those blind dates, yes it was hinted that the brother was suppose to be the one to go, but it still left us wondering WHY?? Also, it never clarified if seme was sleeping with all those randos, or just accompanying them. And most importantly, it is BAD story telling to create a good, hateable villain, only to have them go unpunished for all the shit they pulled. My god I HATED that father son panther duo I skimmed through all the sex to get to the revenge/justice scene only for there to be nothing. If you’re wondering if you should read this, dont, it’ll leave you so fucking frustrated

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    keisha 3 May 13, 2026 5:20 pm

    i completely agree so many plot holes where barley get told what happens to jaewons family id love if they cut some sex scenes out where we can jst get a full in depth story telling about him cus hes actually interesting