I've read stories with tis concept or something similar so maybe that's why this one didn't land for me. It's honestly way too fast, and progresses their relationship too quickly. On top of that, the concept of the mc being able to read minds kinda loses momentum and is forgotten at certain points for the sake of the jealousy plot and I just really can't keep up. Really needed more build up but the author just jumped the gun to kickstart them having sex without giving it a proper dialogue :/
I've read stories with tis concept or something similar so maybe that's why this one didn't land for me. It's honestly way too fast, and progresses their relationship too quickly. On top of that, the concept of the mc being able to read minds kinda loses momentum and is forgotten at certain points for the sake of the jealousy plot and I just really can't keep up. Really needed more build up but the author just jumped the gun to kickstart them having sex without giving it a proper dialogue :/