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anyone reading the novel? I am and I dont like the story telling/ narration. it's too opin...

Eelyas March 16, 2026 3:02 pm

anyone reading the novel? I am and I dont like the story telling/ narration. it's too opinionated if that's the correct word. the author keeps going in different topics, or mentions something from the past or someone. aggghh I can't keep the momentum when reading it because there's no buildup, it'sso irritating to read. I'm already in volume 2 but only skimmed through the chapters.
tell me it will be better Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)

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    honeebuni March 16, 2026 5:39 pm

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    I felt like it was too much of a slow in the beginning until they had sex in Hong Kong, and everything picked up after. But I feel like it was necessary to lay the groundwork so that we can enjoy the story even more later on. I thought it's really well written even with terrible ai translation.

    I wouldn't want you to waste your time reading something you don't enjoy, but I couldn't stop reading it once it picked up. (After Hong Kong). I love how jealous Kun can get, how mature and unexpectedly sexy Yeehyeon is. There is a major issue that the mc and ml deal with throughout the novel (not asking Yeeyeon for his consent about the changing), but even how they dealt with it was not rushed or sloppy.

    Anyway, I'd be curious to hear what you end up doing or if you found it helpful later on. (=・ω・=)

    Eelyas March 17, 2026 1:30 am
    SPOILERI felt like it was too much of a slow in the beginning until they had sex in Hong Kong, and everything picked up after. But I feel like it was necessary to lay the groundwork so that we can enjoy the sto... honeebuni

    At first, I only saw the SPOILER in your message so I was confused and checked my message again if I spoiled anything lol. Turns out there's more to your message