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What I mean is that there needs to be more povs from the ml so that we can understand how he really feels. If not it just seems like he regrets just because its the plot.
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What I mean is that there needs to be more povs from the ml so that we can understand how he really feels. If not it just seems like he regrets just because its the plot.
I cooked this waaaayyy too long and now that I finished it its just meh, I really like angst and tops that work regally hard on their redemption arc so this felt underwhelming. The author made it seem like the mc was cooking up some genius plan to hurt the ml and I was so excited but that whole plot went to trash and it just made it seemed like the ml didn't really love mc after all. Idk the story would've been waayyy better if the angst was heavier.