I really like how the synopsis was written which would made me expect that it would really be a great story but uhmmm, kudos to the writer for the efforts as well as for their illustrator for doing a good job for the artstyle.
I don't want to leave bad remarks to stories that I read but that was a hell of unexpected turn of events. It wasn't your usual turning of events.
I understand the possessiveness and obsession Jeremy has with Lucian, considering that he is the only friend he had growing up. He set his eyes for Lucian the first time he saw him and he knows that he really wants Lucian however his actions after being rejected don't matches to his true feelings towards Lucian. You could've done better than fucking around people in front of the man you love. Using jealousy and lust won't help you win people's love tsktsk. And that character development and redemption arc weren't enough to compensate all of those SA.
I just thought that maybe Lucian fell more to Jeremy especially that he had looked for him after going away while Daniel never did. Maybe, the author was just bias to Jeremy. Maybe Daniel really just admire Lucian and he just looked up to Lucian as he is a person in low background that had noblemen locked their interest unto him. MAYBE JUST MAYBE, I thought that Lucian did loved Jeremy but was afraid when he became overly possessive so he just need someone or something to happen for him to realize what he truly felt. Then it help me finish reading this.
I don't really want to leave bad comments and I hope I will not offend readers and the author. The story could've been better if there were more chapters for redemption or if Jeremy's action were tone down a little. ( I was really mad knowing that he did try to let one of their butlers "touch" Lucian )
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I really like how the synopsis was written which would made me expect that it would really be a great story but uhmmm, kudos to the writer for the efforts as well as for their illustrator for doing a good job for the artstyle.
I don't want to leave bad remarks to stories that I read but that was a hell of unexpected turn of events. It wasn't your usual turning of events.
I understand the possessiveness and obsession Jeremy has with Lucian, considering that he is the only friend he had growing up. He set his eyes for Lucian the first time he saw him and he knows that he really wants Lucian however his actions after being rejected don't matches to his true feelings towards Lucian. You could've done better than fucking around people in front of the man you love. Using jealousy and lust won't help you win people's love tsktsk. And that character development and redemption arc weren't enough to compensate all of those SA.
I just thought that maybe Lucian fell more to Jeremy especially that he had looked for him after going away while Daniel never did. Maybe, the author was just bias to Jeremy. Maybe Daniel really just admire Lucian and he just looked up to Lucian as he is a person in low background that had noblemen locked their interest unto him. MAYBE JUST MAYBE, I thought that Lucian did loved Jeremy but was afraid when he became overly possessive so he just need someone or something to happen for him to realize what he truly felt. Then it help me finish reading this.
I don't really want to leave bad comments and I hope I will not offend readers and the author. The story could've been better if there were more chapters for redemption or if Jeremy's action were tone down a little. ( I was really mad knowing that he did try to let one of their butlers "touch" Lucian )