First of all, it’s a stress free read and that’s a good thing. But it wasn’t wrong when someone said it was kinda cringy. I think the only reason is because the dialogues are so flat. This could’ve ended in like 8-15 chapters to be honest and it would’ve been better. Many chapters were so filler like. And they tend to jump around a lot. Once again, dialogues are really flat, scenes are not smooth and that the feelings are all over the place. Totally no emotional connection with both of them but I do like this kinda trope and thankfully no 3 guy messing them up and no non con. I wouldn’t read it again but I don’t feel like I wasted my time reading this. It’s a good break from all the unnecessary drama and traumatic bl updating at the point.
First of all, it’s a stress free read and that’s a good thing. But it wasn’t wrong when someone said it was kinda cringy. I think the only reason is because the dialogues are so flat. This could’ve ended in like 8-15 chapters to be honest and it would’ve been better. Many chapters were so filler like. And they tend to jump around a lot. Once again, dialogues are really flat, scenes are not smooth and that the feelings are all over the place. Totally no emotional connection with both of them but I do like this kinda trope and thankfully no 3 guy messing them up and no non con. I wouldn’t read it again but I don’t feel like I wasted my time reading this. It’s a good break from all the unnecessary drama and traumatic bl updating at the point.