Smut is amazing and most of these kinks go well together (if you like one, you probably like the rest) and the story is great. For smut. I hate it when they drag it too long and make it into a soap opera and everything is either sickeningly sweet or so damn toxic while at the same time it's just boring. This isn't boring. Not your thing probably. Smut is peak though, but it's an "acquired" taste

No tension no buildup everything is comically on the nose and in your face, not to mention corny af. Smut doesn’t get to be sexy just by pumping out one kink after the other. Quality over quantity man u gotta put at least a little thought and care into it and have a lil smidgin of creativity and a dash of whimsy and imagination in ur heart or else u get these bullshit sex scenes where I’m just like whattamievenlookinat.
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