I know this author is trying to do a long story for the first time but they definitely need to practice better writing skills, bc the last 10 chapters genuinely was just character assassination/regression for the top. No one likes unnecessary drama shoehorned in that just led to a bunch of abuse and noncon, and then expect everything to be forgiven later. Poor yoil (monday), he deserved so much better ToT shoutout to the side couple they’re fucked up and toxic but at least they respect each other.
I know this author is trying to do a long story for the first time but they definitely need to practice better writing skills, bc the last 10 chapters genuinely was just character assassination/regression for the top. No one likes unnecessary drama shoehorned in that just led to a bunch of abuse and noncon, and then expect everything to be forgiven later. Poor yoil (monday), he deserved so much better ToT shoutout to the side couple they’re fucked up and toxic but at least they respect each other.