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Enough abt the art- the dialogue…

mmmh March 21, 2026 8:31 am

The art is totally fine, don’t really understand the complaints completely. You’re entitled to your own opinions with the art. I think not enough people have a problem with the writing in this. Whenever I read something, I never expect extraordinary story or even fully developed characters;; BUT the character motivations don’t make any sense in this story????? I don’t know how to describe it but the dialogue also feels unnatural(?) like more so than usual? I don’t know, but I feel like with a seasoned editor this story has a lot potential fr

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