I'm not one to leave a critic on things because I don't know much, but as a writer that never finished any of her books—I say I'm disappointed.
For a story to introduce characters left and right, we didn't get a story for Michael, didn't see Leticia's father try harder, didn't see that adopted sister, and what Empress, we didn't see them talk.
As well as the fact that there's just too much happening, what do you mean her mother may be the dragon, or something that relates both, and what about Iblis or whatever, the fact that they added the detail about all the higher demons following a certain someone written in the prophecy. This is a lot of things stacked together into a mess.
And why did her personality change so much? Sure, a person grows vulnerable with someone they trust, but isn't that sudden? My frustration reached the roof with that. Oh I saved you, you'll save me, next moment I'm in love—okay fuck off lmao
Anyway, this is just a rant, AND THAT BABY DRAGON AND THE FACT THAT IT'S A CRADLE NOT A TOMB? WTF IS THAT SWITCH UP? WHERE DID THAT BABY DRAGON COME FROM???
I'm not one to leave a critic on things because I don't know much, but as a writer that never finished any of her books—I say I'm disappointed.
For a story to introduce characters left and right, we didn't get a story for Michael, didn't see Leticia's father try harder, didn't see that adopted sister, and what Empress, we didn't see them talk.
As well as the fact that there's just too much happening, what do you mean her mother may be the dragon, or something that relates both, and what about Iblis or whatever, the fact that they added the detail about all the higher demons following a certain someone written in the prophecy. This is a lot of things stacked together into a mess.
And why did her personality change so much? Sure, a person grows vulnerable with someone they trust, but isn't that sudden? My frustration reached the roof with that. Oh I saved you, you'll save me, next moment I'm in love—okay fuck off lmao
Anyway, this is just a rant, AND THAT BABY DRAGON AND THE FACT THAT IT'S A CRADLE NOT A TOMB? WTF IS THAT SWITCH UP? WHERE DID THAT BABY DRAGON COME FROM???