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I feel the same, the storytelling isn’t that good in this one, it’s like they have to explain all the feelings and nuances instead of showing it.
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I feel the same, the storytelling isn’t that good in this one, it’s like they have to explain all the feelings and nuances instead of showing it.
Im glad that they finally confessed and all. But is it bad to say that I cant feel their chemistry at all?
It feels like I know how they feel for each other because they are telling us that they feel that way.
It feels like the times they have interacted are so limited, that it makes me wonder why he would have fallen so quickly for her. And the same for her, I understand a bit more why she would like him considering he "saved" her in her past life. But even to my understanding, they didnt interact much back then either. So why does she like him?
Im just confused, it feels rushed. Cute... but rushed