idk why but everytime i read this shounen AI i get this absolute hatred boiling inside of me that i wish i never set eyes on this work. No listen even the characters, i wish'd they would all be dead, specifically the ML and MC and i have no idea why. Ykw. Maybe i DO have an idea why. Dont waste your time on this story. What makes a story interesting is the "before they got together" the character development, the drama, the character complexity. But there's nothing like that here. Seing them being happy together makes me so mad because they are so boring. This had great potential but they chose to make it something that isnt complex at all, just a character obssesing over his boyfriend without any clear good character writing. I do love a good obssesion but the way that this was written? I cant help but roll my eyes. A work like that needs to have at least a big number of chapters, if it doesnt its gonna be dog shit. The mc is your typiical obssesed twink that u see in every psychological work, nothing new here. What is GOOD witht he obssesive twinks in other works is that their obssesion has depht. You know why, how and how deep their obssesion goes, with their facial expression, storytelling, their dual thinking and how they act when the ML is emotionally cruel. This story just has a normal NOT EVEN COMPLEX couple. The ML just goes around killing with an expresionless face, no actually, IN EVERY FUCKING PANNEL THERE IS 0 EMOTION? This shit pisses me off so bad, it's psychological, make their relationship at least interesting. BUT NO. Only thing we got is THIS. We can get an exemple similar to this which is (ur gonna laugh) billy and stu. Now compare billy and stu to these two boring ass sorry excuse of a character I FUCKING HATE THIS SO MUCH
idk why but everytime i read this shounen AI i get this absolute hatred boiling inside of me that i wish i never set eyes on this work. No listen even the characters, i wish'd they would all be dead, specifically the ML and MC and i have no idea why. Ykw. Maybe i DO have an idea why. Dont waste your time on this story. What makes a story interesting is the "before they got together" the character development, the drama, the character complexity. But there's nothing like that here. Seing them being happy together makes me so mad because they are so boring. This had great potential but they chose to make it something that isnt complex at all, just a character obssesing over his boyfriend without any clear good character writing. I do love a good obssesion but the way that this was written? I cant help but roll my eyes. A work like that needs to have at least a big number of chapters, if it doesnt its gonna be dog shit. The mc is your typiical obssesed twink that u see in every psychological work, nothing new here. What is GOOD witht he obssesive twinks in other works is that their obssesion has depht. You know why, how and how deep their obssesion goes, with their facial expression, storytelling, their dual thinking and how they act when the ML is emotionally cruel. This story just has a normal NOT EVEN COMPLEX couple. The ML just goes around killing with an expresionless face, no actually, IN EVERY FUCKING PANNEL THERE IS 0 EMOTION? This shit pisses me off so bad, it's psychological, make their relationship at least interesting. BUT NO. Only thing we got is THIS. We can get an exemple similar to this which is (ur gonna laugh) billy and stu. Now compare billy and stu to these two boring ass sorry excuse of a character I FUCKING HATE THIS SO MUCH