The story should have ended when Rahsta died. She got no Justice. I'm not sure i will finish it. I don't even ship Naviar and Heinrey at this point. They don't have that much chemistry and he's low key evil. "I'm not going to war because I love you" completely unnecessary war BTW. Probably killed his brother. It could have easily been him or the ex queen. Naviar doesn't seem like the main character and it makes you wonder was she all that much smarter than Rahsta at all? The emperor's baby getting murdered. I stil low key don't believe it and that infant didn't deserve that. Neither did Rahsta. I don't think she's innocent, but she started doing truly evil stuff when she was backed into a corner. Sovieshu was just a bad king. Idgaf about him. In some ways this story is really realistic, but when you add the fluffy parts of the story it is really jarring. I also just find the main romance in this story boring but to go back and forth between child murder and slavery to oh I have twins is jarring. I don't think it's bad writing. I just don't care for the main romance and want to know what happens to the kingdoms. I don't think this story is horrible or has bad writing but I don't think it was for me. It was too serious in some of its themes and not serious enough in others I couldn't figure out what genre this story was in. Who is the target audience? All the women are victims some are just more lucky than others. This was a mess of a ramble sorry.
The story should have ended when Rahsta died. She got no Justice. I'm not sure i will finish it. I don't even ship Naviar and Heinrey at this point. They don't have that much chemistry and he's low key evil. "I'm not going to war because I love you" completely unnecessary war BTW. Probably killed his brother. It could have easily been him or the ex queen. Naviar doesn't seem like the main character and it makes you wonder was she all that much smarter than Rahsta at all? The emperor's baby getting murdered. I stil low key don't believe it and that infant didn't deserve that. Neither did Rahsta. I don't think she's innocent, but she started doing truly evil stuff when she was backed into a corner. Sovieshu was just a bad king. Idgaf about him. In some ways this story is really realistic, but when you add the fluffy parts of the story it is really jarring. I also just find the main romance in this story boring but to go back and forth between child murder and slavery to oh I have twins is jarring. I don't think it's bad writing. I just don't care for the main romance and want to know what happens to the kingdoms. I don't think this story is horrible or has bad writing but I don't think it was for me. It was too serious in some of its themes and not serious enough in others I couldn't figure out what genre this story was in. Who is the target audience? All the women are victims some are just more lucky than others. This was a mess of a ramble sorry.