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Good concept, bad execution

angeltyun__ March 24, 2026 4:38 pm

This is fucking messy. They add one plot bridge after another for the sake of drama. A foreshadow would have been VERY nice, you know. And who the fuck is Mr. Seo?? Why introduce a character literally at the last freaking chapter, he wasnt even relevant at this point. This was really good, I love the story as a concept itself but the way it was told is just nuh-uh.

The locking yoonjae up part was just so unnecessary, and ML kept making me shout "what the fuck is stopping you!" for the nth time every time he kept dodging the question and not telling MC the truth. This could have ended if he just told MC everything after finally finding him, but since this is a story, drama is necessary, however they could have put him in a worse situation that really actually prevents him from speaking but NO. He's already at the top of the food chain and nobody could touch him so seriously what the fuck was stopping him?

The cousin was a big lost too, he was clearly used as a plot device despite looking so important to them, they could have utilized him more. Plus, planting the ugly twink esper as a spy inside the association wasnt utilized too, bro literally did nothing for the terrorist peeps.

*Sighs* overall, plotwise 10/10, but because of the execution and storytelling it's a 5 for me. Such a big waste, honestly. This could have been an all time guideverse banger if it was told really well.

Responses
    blweeb2234 April 1, 2026 1:53 pm

    Yeah. They introduced so many interesting characters towards the end and left us so many plot holes. Mannn

    Fel May 6, 2026 6:57 pm

    I legit want to ship the cousin with that mysterious caller though ╥﹏╥ I mean, come on, why there's so many interesting characters popping up here and there!?