Overall the story isnt even mid for me, but maybe it works for other people. The relationship between the two characters doesn't even whisper romance to me, but it very loudly tells LUST!! which would be fine, but the story isnt written out that way. The FL has a traumatic SA experience which I feel would've weighed in during their first time, but it was never mentioned. She feels more trauma about murdering her rapist than the SA itself (which itself is fine, but then why write the SA scene? In what way does it help the story, or shape her character?) And it's so funny that their first time is to "help warm her up" like- WHAT??? This feels like it should've been written as a comedy instead. To which SHE was fine with because he's handsome- ok. Which again, would be fine if we were shown the characters are only physically interested in each other (I mean they told each other their names before banging), but then the story tries to make it romantic but like the characters don't even know each other??
The art is fine, but I have personal beef with the way the ML is drawn. The FL's whole torso can fit inside his chest cavity. Cmon man.
Overall the story isnt even mid for me, but maybe it works for other people.
The relationship between the two characters doesn't even whisper romance to me, but it very loudly tells LUST!! which would be fine, but the story isnt written out that way. The FL has a traumatic SA experience which I feel would've weighed in during their first time, but it was never mentioned. She feels more trauma about murdering her rapist than the SA itself (which itself is fine, but then why write the SA scene? In what way does it help the story, or shape her character?)
And it's so funny that their first time is to "help warm her up" like- WHAT??? This feels like it should've been written as a comedy instead.
To which SHE was fine with because he's handsome- ok. Which again, would be fine if we were shown the characters are only physically interested in each other (I mean they told each other their names before banging), but then the story tries to make it romantic but like the characters don't even know each other??
The art is fine, but I have personal beef with the way the ML is drawn. The FL's whole torso can fit inside his chest cavity. Cmon man.