This is good and I liked the elaborate, well-thought out process Remilia took to seek vengeance against the ppl who wronged her esp the antagonist (aka the star maiden) BUT I wished they made the main antagonist smarter. It's not that satisfying knowing our mc here is playing 5d chess while the antagonist is playing, idk, snakes and ladders? It's dumb going through so many chapters knowing the antagonist could LITERALLY be defeated in a single flick of a finger. I know it's supposed to make her suffer even more but it's not that satisfying knowing the source of conflict herself is as dumb as a rock.
One more thing, the unnecessary romance. I'm sorry, but I don't particularly see any sort of chemistry between the main leads. Feels like it's forced for the sake of it. Plus, the person ML fell in love with & cared about is not even Remilia, but the façade Remilia put for show—Emi. I feel like it wouldn't make sense for Remilia herself to fall in love either, since the only person she has ever cared about is Emi (it actually would make even more sense for her to "fall in love" with Emi rather than the actual male lead)
I like the idea of a villainess entering her body once again and seeking revenge solely for the kind-hearted female lead but this could definitely be better.
This is good and I liked the elaborate, well-thought out process Remilia took to seek vengeance against the ppl who wronged her esp the antagonist (aka the star maiden) BUT I wished they made the main antagonist smarter. It's not that satisfying knowing our mc here is playing 5d chess while the antagonist is playing, idk, snakes and ladders? It's dumb going through so many chapters knowing the antagonist could LITERALLY be defeated in a single flick of a finger. I know it's supposed to make her suffer even more but it's not that satisfying knowing the source of conflict herself is as dumb as a rock.
One more thing, the unnecessary romance. I'm sorry, but I don't particularly see any sort of chemistry between the main leads. Feels like it's forced for the sake of it. Plus, the person ML fell in love with & cared about is not even Remilia, but the façade Remilia put for show—Emi. I feel like it wouldn't make sense for Remilia herself to fall in love either, since the only person she has ever cared about is Emi (it actually would make even more sense for her to "fall in love" with Emi rather than the actual male lead)
I like the idea of a villainess entering her body once again and seeking revenge solely for the kind-hearted female lead but this could definitely be better.