Lacking

this isn't her first manga so idk man, but i'm pretty sure she's working hard w/ her editors to improve herself

this is her style, I'm afraid, we can only hope the transitions would improve. apparently, sensei prioritizes kinks and smut more than a deeper substance.

I was a bit concerned about the first story uke's self esteem and was hoping it would be addressed somehow but it wasn't.

well, I'm pretty sure these stories are all made with everlasting love in mind. they can sort things out eventually, just they won't be included in the manga.

I read the author's other stories and I now understand the pattern of the way the story develops... the art is so well done, I only hoped that the plot would thicken too, but only something else did (๑•ㅂ•)و✧