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i tried so hard to finish this but the plot progresses like... eh, that's it? and it sucks...

Chuuloove March 27, 2026 4:06 pm

i tried so hard to finish this but the plot progresses like... eh, that's it? and it sucks that author tries so hard to make the story interesting but they fail, so they resort to abusing their poor character and that becomes the center point of the story. atp author should just make a hwa with no plot, only goon and stop writing bunch of NONSENSE cuz let's face it, good art can't save you from HORRENDOUS writing. and lastly, let's not waste each others time on making me read this nonsense shall wee???

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    Chuuloove March 27, 2026 4:20 pm

    if y'all gonna abuse a character, at least make it worth it. Use it as a well-crafted plot device instead of it being a mere instrument for the sake of grabbing attention. INVEST AND PRACTICE IN YALLS WRITING SKILLS to not make a goofy ass plot and waste animators skills on shit plot. Respect your characters and not make their suffering futile with your horrendous writing.

    Chuuloove March 27, 2026 4:26 pm

    and don't even talk about the character design. none of em have any interesting personalities and qualities. they remain static up until last chap i've read before dropping it (i think around 70+)