still the same chapter/page yeah I know the characters are all bland especially AO
unseasoned
yeah I went back to reading then I looked at the page again and came back here yes I’m very bored yes I clearly have nothing better to do, is this a waste of time and effort? Will this be read by someone? Don’t know don’t care :)
I do sometimes go to my homepage and read my comments to see interactions but also laugh at my dumbass because life and fun
I’m having so much fun you know having a conversation with myself
Anyway my last comment to this page
Like I said before don’t like AO
And I know what it is everything
Body
Face
Character
Words
Even name
Don’t like it don’t quite hate it but still don’t like it
still feels like eating a naked piece of toast
nope don’t like AO if I have to compare like a piece of bread specifically white toast
But I mean I guess it’s a short short story why would I expect grade writing from this I’m a complete it I’ve read worse I’ve read better but I’m having fun reviewing lol