Dawg when reading this i was like "bro, when will literally anything happen?" And I look that how many chapters are left and I see 10... Truly a nothing burger, there is no such thing as stakes. And one last thing, the FL is boring as fuck, despite the fact she has a on paper really interesting backstory, her personality is that of a rock, you'd think her past would impact her in any way BUT IT DOESNT, she literally feels like a side character.
Dawg when reading this i was like "bro, when will literally anything happen?"
And I look that how many chapters are left and I see 10...
Truly a nothing burger, there is no such thing as stakes.
And one last thing, the FL is boring as fuck, despite the fact she has a on paper really interesting backstory, her personality is that of a rock, you'd think her past would impact her in any way BUT IT DOESNT, she literally feels like a side character.