I think this story is fleshed out well. The plots are nice, ending is so-so, though I think author-nim covered how the Park siblings got the power in the first place under the blanket. No explanation on that but overall, kinda nice story. On another personal note- . . . . . . Poly between Jaewoo, Hyeonjin, and Mujin would be nice when I first read it, but I changed my mind when I reached the final chapters where Jiheon was involved and later was revealed to be Jaewoo's friend. I felt sorry for Eunjoon@Jiheon, considering how he abandoned the reality world to chase after Jaewoo. That's real crazy top traits compared to Mujin.
By the end when they left the fictional world, I was frustrated with Jaewoo's attachment to Hyeonjin when your friend clearly went inside that world to save you. Probably because I think a story between Jaewoo and Eunjoo would be more interesting, but whatever.
I think this story is fleshed out well. The plots are nice, ending is so-so, though I think author-nim covered how the Park siblings got the power in the first place under the blanket. No explanation on that but overall, kinda nice story. On another personal note-
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Poly between Jaewoo, Hyeonjin, and Mujin would be nice when I first read it, but I changed my mind when I reached the final chapters where Jiheon was involved and later was revealed to be Jaewoo's friend. I felt sorry for Eunjoon@Jiheon, considering how he abandoned the reality world to chase after Jaewoo. That's real crazy top traits compared to Mujin.
By the end when they left the fictional world, I was frustrated with Jaewoo's attachment to Hyeonjin when your friend clearly went inside that world to save you. Probably because I think a story between Jaewoo and Eunjoo would be more interesting, but whatever.
This one is nice as is.