Every time I come back to read this story I constantly feel like I’m drunk or skip a few chapters. Does anybody feel the same way? I know that skipping back and forth between past and present is the style of storytelling but like I cant follow the thought and behavior of the characters at all. And its not because “oh the uke is crazy thats why u dont understand him” but its more like what is happening? Why is this suddenly a thing? Is it just me??
Every time I come back to read this story I constantly feel like I’m drunk or skip a few chapters. Does anybody feel the same way? I know that skipping back and forth between past and present is the style of storytelling but like I cant follow the thought and behavior of the characters at all. And its not because “oh the uke is crazy thats why u dont understand him” but its more like what is happening? Why is this suddenly a thing? Is it just me??