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Amazing story!!

rukiamara April 2, 2026 5:26 am

It's a short story, but damn, writing, characters, chemistry, storytelling, everything on point!

I love the whole reincarnation part, it's showed in a such interesting way, how meeting Asha triggered Arden's memories in Albert's mind, and how he was basically talking to himself all the time, but Albert couldn't accept that, I'm glad the author confirmed that also in the notes!
Asha and Albert also connect through a tough childhood, and I love how they were healing their wounds

Also, I'm glad that in the family tree, author pointed out all connections, and it's confirmed that Asha was lovers only with Arden - there is a 'past lovers' line, and as per connections - Alberto (Albert's father) and that female Blake ancestor loved Asha, but that's it - there's only an arrow that they 'loved' Asha, nothing from Asha (Asha even was calling Alberto a creep and crazy, and kicked him out after his attack when beginning to be turned into a vampire), so I take basically Asha was ever only with Arden/Albert, and now they will be together for eternity, damn, it's so beautiful

Exactly this is how dark/psychological/toxic story should look like, it keeps you in suspense, you feel terror and uncertainty till the last moment! Where we have well throughout characters profile and storytelling!
And it's a perfect example that psychological/dark story doesn't necessarily mean overloaded SA how majority of authors think, where the whole series concept revolves around this topic, many times without any meaning or plan, just a cheap rapey excuse pretending to be something more/deep, where in reality majority of these series have nothing to do with trauma or psychological aspect, but pretend to be as horrifying rape scenes are literally pushed everywhere without any consistency, making it more like a shallow fetish porn.

Either way, the fact that such an amazing story was showed in only 15 chapters, it's a peak!
I'm hoping for side stories!!

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