So far the story is very intriguing, the translations could be a little better (i.e. pronouns correctly, knowing which dialogue goes to which character, text being readable, etc.) Other than that, definitely give this a read.
So far the story is very intriguing, the translations could be a little better (i.e. pronouns correctly, knowing which dialogue goes to which character, text being readable, etc.) Other than that, definitely give this a read.