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man there really is no chemistry between these two

plugged in to the cloud April 6, 2026 6:45 am

focused too hard on the world-building, and not enough on the character development or the plot

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    Meet_my_husband_phainon April 6, 2026 7:38 am

    Even though I have not read this one's novel but I always feel there are some gaps. There is some discontinuity that's why maybe we all feel they lack emotional connection

    plugged in to the cloud April 6, 2026 7:43 am

    ahh good point ill read the novel first

    Devi frenz April 6, 2026 10:26 am
    Even though I have not read this one's novel but I always feel there are some gaps. There is some discontinuity that's why maybe we all feel they lack emotional connection Meet_my_husband_phainon

    Idk about this because i feel like the emotional connection is well conveyed spcially when you comapre it to the beginning. Ig i see it differently