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Some points are valid but even then expecting all the exposition and explaination in detail that it seems you want within only two chapters seems like a bit of stretch….
yeah, my issue is just they don’t touch on the will right after he gets it and it seems like he didn’t even read it so i just don’t like it being cast aside when it seems like his mother plays a big role
they rushed through the intro like mom died, grandma in the hospital, huge debt, homeless now, signs a contract with no information, blah blah blah. it’s so predictable with no thought behind the actions and it got annoying. like they didn’t even touch on the mother’s will and just left it as a side note. no one explains anything and i don’t want to have to read to the end to find out what is supposed to be explained in the beginning. everything just feels so forced.