Okay it started off good, the plot is interesting but it's just moving so damn fast I suppose???
Also the romance, I feel like I would get more hooked if they shown literally anything between the father and the white haired girl instead of just letting us assume whats could be happening in the bg? The most I got from how he could have liked her before that was "maybe I have a dilemma" or some shit like that. Show us more idk.
Interesting plot, really questionable story telling. If you just like fighting give it a read ig
Okay it started off good, the plot is interesting but it's just moving so damn fast I suppose???
Also the romance, I feel like I would get more hooked if they shown literally anything between the father and the white haired girl instead of just letting us assume whats could be happening in the bg? The most I got from how he could have liked her before that was "maybe I have a dilemma" or some shit like that. Show us more idk.
Interesting plot, really questionable story telling. If you just like fighting give it a read ig