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They're cute but

Daishiks_dildo April 8, 2026 6:44 pm

So much of this story was lost in not explaining shit properly. I expected better of moscareto. Still they're cuties!

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    AlienCatKan April 10, 2026 9:01 pm

    Nah it's whole thing early on is the mystery. I hate stories that spoonfeed the entire plot/lore at the start like the readers are babies. I love a good mystery but it doesn't mean the story should be confusing because of it, this one was perfect with the mystery

    Daishiks_dildo April 11, 2026 10:41 am

    I like mystery. I love complicated plots and realistic characters but this reminds me of blaze out and both are written poorly in my opinion but I'm glad you like it.

    AlienCatKan April 11, 2026 3:41 pm
    I like mystery. I love complicated plots and realistic characters but this reminds me of blaze out and both are written poorly in my opinion but I'm glad you like it. Daishiks_dildo

    Fair enough, this story makes sense by 20 chapters in I think it was around then or maybe before but it can be a bit confusing at the start

    Daishiks_dildo April 11, 2026 4:21 pm

    It's not that it doesn't make sense, it's just poorly fleshed out.

    wawa May 4, 2026 4:25 am
    It's not that it doesn't make sense, it's just poorly fleshed out. Daishiks_dildo

    yeah, this story could easily have about 80 chapters if the characters + backstory were properly fleshed out. nonetheless, it's still good tho it could've been longer

    AlienCatKan May 5, 2026 11:29 pm
    yeah, this story could easily have about 80 chapters if the characters + backstory were properly fleshed out. nonetheless, it's still good tho it could've been longer wawa

    Agreed