I DONT ACTUALLY HATE THE STORY BTW. anyways, I guess characters can only be as smart as the author lmao Using any amount of critical thinking will literally cause the story to fall apart. For every decision the author made, it never made any realistic sense to do. For example, why hire a body guard thats a high-schooler with no prior experience, if MK really is as powerful as they say, making most of the people in a school paid actors shouldn't be hard, or, get teachers who will protect her. Logically speaking there is no reason why you would choose our ML.
But, I still enjoyed the story, but it's definitely not very deep or complex.
One last thing, a mix between rational and irrational thought but I genuinely hate Doha, she's literally so annoying, the fact they try and force you to end up liking her is absurd, only in the very late chapters does she actually start to become redeemable. Anotha, so everyone in this world is genuinely stupid, no way that when hundreds of people see Gabin get forcibly captured and then they attempted to kidnap her, they're just like "ah, its just one of her usual outbursts" if it was an irrational outburst, why would her grandma react that way? Why would she attempt to silence her? Bro there's no way that her grandma could possibly have any leverage, she's made the most dumb choices ever and always gets saved by the plot, no matter how powerful you are, in this age you can't be as reckless as she is. Dawg, like the reporter dying subsequently after looking into her actions, BITCH YOU MIGHT AS WELL SAY YOU KILLED HIM, like that is a the biggest blunder of all blunders. Uhhh if you read this all im kinda surprised lol.
All in all I enjoyed this most when I didnt think critically 5.5/10
I DONT ACTUALLY HATE THE STORY BTW.
anyways,
I guess characters can only be as smart as the author lmao
Using any amount of critical thinking will literally cause the story to fall apart.
For every decision the author made, it never made any realistic sense to do.
For example, why hire a body guard thats a high-schooler with no prior experience, if MK really is as powerful as they say, making most of the people in a school paid actors shouldn't be hard, or, get teachers who will protect her.
Logically speaking there is no reason why you would choose our ML.
But, I still enjoyed the story, but it's definitely not very deep or complex.
One last thing, a mix between rational and irrational thought but I genuinely hate Doha, she's literally so annoying, the fact they try and force you to end up liking her is absurd, only in the very late chapters does she actually start to become redeemable.
Anotha, so everyone in this world is genuinely stupid, no way that when hundreds of people see Gabin get forcibly captured and then they attempted to kidnap her, they're just like "ah, its just one of her usual outbursts" if it was an irrational outburst, why would her grandma react that way? Why would she attempt to silence her?
Bro there's no way that her grandma could possibly have any leverage, she's made the most dumb choices ever and always gets saved by the plot, no matter how powerful you are, in this age you can't be as reckless as she is.
Dawg, like the reporter dying subsequently after looking into her actions, BITCH YOU MIGHT AS WELL SAY YOU KILLED HIM, like that is a the biggest blunder of all blunders.
Uhhh if you read this all im kinda surprised lol.
All in all I enjoyed this most when I didnt think critically
5.5/10