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It would have been better if he had succumbed to the piano teacher grooming. I think that way the story could have been interesting. IMO it was too short and fast paced and it didn’t need a happy ending
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It would have been better if he had succumbed to the piano teacher grooming. I think that way the story could have been interesting. IMO it was too short and fast paced and it didn’t need a happy ending
Low key, would’ve liked the story if the whole situation hadn’t been so ROMANTICISED. The idea of a story where one character is manipulated into loving the other is actually a great line out. It is the typical psychological story that I like. Twisted and NOT romanticised, because it has to be CLEAR that the characters are both into each other only cause of dependence. But somehow the story managed to fail that. The studentxteacher is so unnecessary AND wrong, while only making the story taste more like lukewarm water. Is Mc forgiving his parents and making his rebellious phase seem like a childish tantrum? Hell nah. And the worst thing is that making the dependence both ml and mc have seems like actual fairy-tale love. Hell nah. I like psychological stories, also the twisted ones, but this one is just bad. Bad and stupid. Did the author use their brain while writing this? No one knows.