The concept in itself isn't terrible. The timing of revealing such a "power" is what doesn't fit well. The plot was already a mess, but now it's just messier. I laugh humourlessly at all the new chapters.
The concept in itself isn't terrible. The timing of revealing such a "power" is what doesn't fit well. The plot was already a mess, but now it's just messier. I laugh humourlessly at all the new chapters.