So far I like how the plot is going on, it's not totally perfect but it's tolerable to read. And as for the characters—the MC Lilianna, she's cute and unpredictable, but somehow lacks of consistency and dragging herself too much, like it takes too long before she made up her mind, but I like how she changes and improves through step by step. Patience is truly a virtue even for a readers like me, I gotta wait, I know that MC have the potential. I just hope that the author won't disappoint. You go girl! Next, as for the ML, well he's kinda good as well, but I'm expecting more from him, and as for the others characters who are like mushrooms which are suddenly pop out in the scenes, are like giving inconsistency. I hope the phasing and that issue will improve by the author.
Well, it's not done yet, I'll be back and I only hope this series will be 'more' good!
So far I like how the plot is going on, it's not totally perfect but it's tolerable to read. And as for the characters—the MC Lilianna, she's cute and unpredictable, but somehow lacks of consistency and dragging herself too much, like it takes too long before she made up her mind, but I like how she changes and improves through step by step. Patience is truly a virtue even for a readers like me, I gotta wait, I know that MC have the potential. I just hope that the author won't disappoint. You go girl! Next, as for the ML, well he's kinda good as well, but I'm expecting more from him, and as for the others characters who are like mushrooms which are suddenly pop out in the scenes, are like giving inconsistency. I hope the phasing and that issue will improve by the author.
Well, it's not done yet, I'll be back and I only hope this series will be 'more' good!