I really love this. I think this story would've benefitted from being double the length at least to flesh things out a bit more, including Jack and D's relationship and the world building etc. Usually this trope is quite boring, but I loved how the author did it. Just, with the length issue again, the only thing I didn't like was how abrupt it seemed when Jack and D got together for the first time. That seemed a bit random for me (pleasant but random). Still very good tho would recommend
I really love this. I think this story would've benefitted from being double the length at least to flesh things out a bit more, including Jack and D's relationship and the world building etc. Usually this trope is quite boring, but I loved how the author did it. Just, with the length issue again, the only thing I didn't like was how abrupt it seemed when Jack and D got together for the first time. That seemed a bit random for me (pleasant but random). Still very good tho would recommend