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Índigo September 19, 2017 4:47 am

The art in not good, but not the worse either...
I liked the story, the suspense was thrilling, I forgot abot the art in some point...

Responses
    Soerien September 19, 2017 4:31 pm

    Hey!

    It's the Author :D I know it's still not that good, but please forgive me because this was my first work :)

    Anonymous September 19, 2017 7:28 pm
    Hey! It's the Author :D I know it's still not that good, but please forgive me because this was my first work :) Soerien

    You are the autor? Well good job, the story was good, i know that with time you are gonna improve your art style, but for me it was good! Congrats!

    Soerien September 19, 2017 7:32 pm
    You are the autor? Well good job, the story was good, i know that with time you are gonna improve your art style, but for me it was good! Congrats! @Anonymous

    Thank youu! :D It's just a hobby for me, but it's an important hobby where I genuinely want to put an effort in. :) I knew that my first work isn't going to be that mind-blowing, considering how inexperienced I am, and that's why I chose a short story :D Hopefully I'll do much better in future and do a long series :D

    Índigo September 19, 2017 9:35 pm
    Hey! It's the Author :D I know it's still not that good, but please forgive me because this was my first work :) Soerien

    You did a wonderful job!!! Keep it up!!! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

    Soerien September 19, 2017 10:46 pm
    You did a wonderful job!!! Keep it up!!! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ Índigo

    Thank you so much! :D I'm currently trying to improve my art. It was kind of a mistake to do an original story to start things off (That's why people do a lot of doujinshi before doing actual work haha) But yeah, it was an experience :D