You are the autor? Well good job, the story was good, i know that with time you are gonna improve your art style, but for me it was good! Congrats!
Thank youu! :D It's just a hobby for me, but it's an important hobby where I genuinely want to put an effort in. :) I knew that my first work isn't going to be that mind-blowing, considering how inexperienced I am, and that's why I chose a short story :D Hopefully I'll do much better in future and do a long series :D
The art in not good, but not the worse either...
I liked the story, the suspense was thrilling, I forgot abot the art in some point...