I don’t mind the plot of the story - at least, what I could understand. It was pretty weird when panels made me feel as if I’ve skipped some scenes or it felt like there were weird jumps between their position in one scene to the next scene. Like, they had turned away from the person but then next panel they are back in front of the person who I thought MC had already turned away from. There were more scenes in which it didn’t feel like a smooth transition from the previous chapter/panel and felt as if the author had forgotten how they ended it before drawing the next scene lol. It’s also unfortunate that the characters only had maybe 3-4 different expressions so I didn’t really know if ML was smiling out of endearment or smiling out of annoyance lmao. I’m also confused on the direction of FL - like she comes off as being unsure on what she wants to do to “change her fate” while declaring what she wants to do to change her fate.
I don’t mind the plot of the story - at least, what I could understand. It was pretty weird when panels made me feel as if I’ve skipped some scenes or it felt like there were weird jumps between their position in one scene to the next scene. Like, they had turned away from the person but then next panel they are back in front of the person who I thought MC had already turned away from. There were more scenes in which it didn’t feel like a smooth transition from the previous chapter/panel and felt as if the author had forgotten how they ended it before drawing the next scene lol. It’s also unfortunate that the characters only had maybe 3-4 different expressions so I didn’t really know if ML was smiling out of endearment or smiling out of annoyance lmao. I’m also confused on the direction of FL - like she comes off as being unsure on what she wants to do to “change her fate” while declaring what she wants to do to change her fate.