Responses
Pacing is fine... A lot has honestly happened with only 33 chapters. I'm just really itching for more revelations of the past (even a bit more than the smut lol)
I guess when readers are too eager to read what happens next (especially eager for the full-blown sex scenes between Yeonwoo and Rosa), some get too impatient for the next chapters.
Shows Yeonwu is game to Rosa’s harmless ‘prank’. He agreed to it the moment he meddled between Jaewon and Rosa. Rosa of course caught on to it but ig she didn’t expect that quick of a response. Well at present, Yeonwu and Rosa are playing enemies that are dying to get in each other’s pants. They’re even using the mom for NTR roleplay. Rosa also says she prefers Yeonwu sober for whatever’s coming. My girl laid out the plan and Yeonwu bit every bait willingly- from finding Rosa to “What (masochistic bs) should I do so I can get back the ring?” and people- he’s RARING TO GO. This is a first in anything resembling to consent (akin to CNC) for the two after battling their freaks after 20+ chapters. Yeonwu’s more or less accepted his toxic crush while Rosa is still deluding herself as Yeonwu’s no.1 hater. Eh she’ll stop villainizing Yeonwu when her memories come back so.
I genuinely don’t see what’s lacking. Pacing and characterization are both fine in my alley. They’ll fuck soon dw you’ll be shock with what an empty mansion can do + wtf is this who’s the better ml propaganda… Jaewon has the right to be freaked out. Doesn’t mean it’s a forced flaw by the author.