its not that bad itself but it feel rush for short story so if it has so much potential to be a long story it would so interesting why ml so obsessed why mc like him why is mc's siblings like that why ml's brother ask mc that way thats why i say it has potential to be long story but i dont think its bad yall js overreacting not like art style bad either
its not that bad itself but it feel rush for short story so if it has so much potential to be a long story it would so interesting why ml so obsessed why mc like him why is mc's siblings like that why ml's brother ask mc that way thats why i say it has potential to be long story but i dont think its bad yall js overreacting not like art style bad either