Im in awe over how many tropes this story tried miserably to execute: nonetheless, terrible, still, for how poorly it was told. i get that you’re trying to fit a whole narrative in under 80 chapters but do you really need the entirety of that to just fucking spoil the climax as “foreshadowing” so much so that the grand reveal of Yool’s past was so anti-climactic that I had better reveals on 6 chapter mangas. im not even shocked at the complete 180 shift that the story’s fluffy romance vibe shifted into by how obvious everything was; if by any means, you are uncovering a mystery, at least, have the decency to let the readers think for themselves not haphazardly show off the whole plot in one singular flashback like a slapstick story. The whole birdcage trope wasn’t all that interesting, this is vanilla compared to other birdcage tropes out there: Yool being the most arbitrary as he could be can’t even decide what to fill out on his character sheet, bro can’t even decide if he wants to be a lovable himbo or a depraved villain and ends up just being a two-faced emotionally-stunted con artist. don’t even get me started on this overly oblivious 28 year old of a man. Howoo as the ignorant inhabitant of a rock, doesn’t really get how much power he holds over Yool which begs the question as to why this bitch is so desperate to be portrayed as a damsel in distress, you could double down on this love-hate relationship and punish him for all you want, that would’ve been so much more better than this vertebrate shockingly lacking of a backbone. warped and twisted love could be something interesting because it lets people try to decode their character, thoughts, from where they are coming from, but having frivolous characters such as these pales in comparison undoubtedly.
Im in awe over how many tropes this story tried miserably to execute: nonetheless, terrible, still, for how poorly it was told. i get that you’re trying to fit a whole narrative in under 80 chapters but do you really need the entirety of that to just fucking spoil the climax as “foreshadowing” so much so that the grand reveal of Yool’s past was so anti-climactic that I had better reveals on 6 chapter mangas. im not even shocked at the complete 180 shift that the story’s fluffy romance vibe shifted into by how obvious everything was; if by any means, you are uncovering a mystery, at least, have the decency to let the readers think for themselves not haphazardly show off the whole plot in one singular flashback like a slapstick story. The whole birdcage trope wasn’t all that interesting, this is vanilla compared to other birdcage tropes out there: Yool being the most arbitrary as he could be can’t even decide what to fill out on his character sheet, bro can’t even decide if he wants to be a lovable himbo or a depraved villain and ends up just being a two-faced emotionally-stunted con artist. don’t even get me started on this overly oblivious 28 year old of a man. Howoo as the ignorant inhabitant of a rock, doesn’t really get how much power he holds over Yool which begs the question as to why this bitch is so desperate to be portrayed as a damsel in distress, you could double down on this love-hate relationship and punish him for all you want, that would’ve been so much more better than this vertebrate shockingly lacking of a backbone. warped and twisted love could be something interesting because it lets people try to decode their character, thoughts, from where they are coming from, but having frivolous characters such as these pales in comparison undoubtedly.