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3/10

Sharmazi April 20, 2026 3:57 am

Tbh I was expecting much more. The main plot had so much potential but the art and the execution was just ass.

There were many plot holes. The story did not feel smooth. It felt like a prologue of 25 chapters.

ML forcing MC without talking about how he feels about MC. There was ML talking bad about MC, without any solid explanation. MC never telling ML about his trauma. ML just telling everyone that he had another fated partner and MC did not even question (he had his name on his neck). ML kissing another guy and never explaining to MC that it was just a way to make him jealous. What happend to the debts? What happend to the parents of ML? How did they react to their son suddenly offing his previous engagement to marry an alpha? What happend to the omega in the bar? Will i have to assume these things?

Tbh the art was not good enough, I did not even get the depth of the story.


Hope the artist improves themselves cause I would totally read this type of plot anyday with a better art and greater depth to the plots.

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