The story isn't bad, but I will never get over the fact that there was never even one mention of his mother. She would have been alive, he has younger siblings. And if they are his halfsiblings (which I doubt, since they look like him and none of them look like their father) when did she die?
I just have that non-existent mother floating in the back of my mind whenever I read this and I will never get over that unless it gets adressed. I don't think they will at this point tho. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
The story isn't bad, but I will never get over the fact that there was never even one mention of his mother. She would have been alive, he has younger siblings. And if they are his halfsiblings (which I doubt, since they look like him and none of them look like their father) when did she die?
I just have that non-existent mother floating in the back of my mind whenever I read this and I will never get over that unless it gets adressed. I don't think they will at this point tho. ╮(￣▽￣)╭