exactly.. like can we proceed with the plot pls. it feels like they had sex two chaps ago
i feel like it's because the pacing's too fast, there's no emotion TTTT and yeah them having sex feels like it's becoming a normal occurence so we're missing out on plot
I agree It's hard to find that balance between a more mature-feeling kinda smut vs overly expressive... This one got that more mature feeling down, but it lacks just enough expression to make it feel like they're actually feeling something despite how loud our manz be getting
Haha. That's what I've been thinking all this time. The sex scenes is not giving it. I love how the novel shows how Josh gave a lot of emotions evey time they do it and how he really love Chase so I'm expecting too much. I still like how the plot flows tho. We're not missing a lot from the novel
I agree I'd prefer more emotion to the characters
Low-key I can't lie, this artists can't draw sex scenes
There is simply no emotion to it. It's like here's is scene one then scene two
I can hardly tell when someone is cumming or anything, like damn have some type of expression rather than blushing