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Um..... you should continue reading it, gurl I don't want to spoil anything but what you just read is only the tip of the iceberg right now lol
this is why you should read the story first until the recent chapters before forming an opinion
I really like the story so far (ch 25), my only complain is the way they’re handling the revenge plot. I just wish it was a little bit more angsty and realistic, for someone who has been plotting revenge his whole life he gives it up so easily for the fl who he met a few months ago.
I kinda understand if it’s presented that he is just someone with a good heart who doesn’t want to get other people involved in his actions, but he’s not presented that way.
We know in the original novel he betrayed the crown prince (his close friend) and in his pov he even considered torturing the fl’s father to get the information he needed out of him.
If he just fell in love with the fl and that’s why he cares for her I understand, but the romance doesn’t really feel earned since it’s been so quick, and if he just blindly adores her it takes all of the fun out of the character. I was hoping to see the internal struggles he would eventually have with his revenge and his love for her.
I understand this is more of a light and fun story but this is just my opinion.