*I really liked this story at the beginning, but the pacing is honestly horrible. Major events keep happening back-to-back without enough buildup, which makes everything feel rushed. *There’s barely any time for proper world-building or character development, so it’s hard to get attached to the characters or feel immersed *A lot of the current plot could have been spread out much more. I think if the story slowed down and more room to breathe, it would hit a lot harder. Wasted potential :/
*I really liked this story at the beginning, but the pacing is honestly horrible. Major events keep happening back-to-back without enough buildup, which makes everything feel rushed.
*There’s barely any time for proper world-building or character development, so it’s hard to get attached to the characters or feel immersed
*A lot of the current plot could have been spread out much more. I think if the story slowed down and more room to breathe, it would hit a lot harder. Wasted potential :/