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At the start there this felt like a haikaveh fanfic lol I kinda liked the initial dynamic...

Slytherinlarrie April 22, 2026 2:57 am

At the start there this felt like a haikaveh fanfic lol

I kinda liked the initial dynamic of “passionate expressive strong omega” and “calm prejudiced but can accept when he’s wrong alpha” but i feel like this would’ve been MUCH better if there was only a magnetic pull of the fated pair but not instant love and confession from the alpha like a week after meeting and constant heats,

like I wish their personality mix dynamic was explored as a “there’s a magnetic pull but we’re ACTUALLY gonna get to know each other properly and see how it goes” way, the batting place date was nice I wish there was more of that and taking their time, but alpha confessed way too early and randomly for a “rational calm” type, and mc got all blushy and affected way too easy for someone that disliked arrogant alphas, distrusted Alphas in general, and lived in a world where omegas have no opportunity for better jobs and this random powerful alpha came along and confessed in a week, like he was supposed to be smarter and more on guard than to blush and crush on him that easily too

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    Slytherinlarrie April 22, 2026 3:00 am

    But also weirdly out of all these comics including many omegaverse ones I’ve read, I felt heteronormativity in this one too much, idk

    On the other hand if y’all have any comic recs with a character design like the omega with long hair etc pls do tell thanku