At the start there this felt like a haikaveh fanfic lol
I kinda liked the initial dynamic of “passionate expressive strong omega” and “calm prejudiced but can accept when he’s wrong alpha” but i feel like this would’ve been MUCH better if there was only a magnetic pull of the fated pair but not instant love and confession from the alpha like a week after meeting and constant heats,
like I wish their personality mix dynamic was explored as a “there’s a magnetic pull but we’re ACTUALLY gonna get to know each other properly and see how it goes” way, the batting place date was nice I wish there was more of that and taking their time, but alpha confessed way too early and randomly for a “rational calm” type, and mc got all blushy and affected way too easy for someone that disliked arrogant alphas, distrusted Alphas in general, and lived in a world where omegas have no opportunity for better jobs and this random powerful alpha came along and confessed in a week, like he was supposed to be smarter and more on guard than to blush and crush on him that easily too
At the start there this felt like a haikaveh fanfic lol
I kinda liked the initial dynamic of “passionate expressive strong omega” and “calm prejudiced but can accept when he’s wrong alpha” but i feel like this would’ve been MUCH better if there was only a magnetic pull of the fated pair but not instant love and confession from the alpha like a week after meeting and constant heats,
like I wish their personality mix dynamic was explored as a “there’s a magnetic pull but we’re ACTUALLY gonna get to know each other properly and see how it goes” way, the batting place date was nice I wish there was more of that and taking their time, but alpha confessed way too early and randomly for a “rational calm” type, and mc got all blushy and affected way too easy for someone that disliked arrogant alphas, distrusted Alphas in general, and lived in a world where omegas have no opportunity for better jobs and this random powerful alpha came along and confessed in a week, like he was supposed to be smarter and more on guard than to blush and crush on him that easily too