It’s actually really good. I love love the art and the vibes. You can tell the artist really took their time with their research and tried to include representation which I really appreciate. It started off really good
but I’m not gonna lie, I don’t like that the main conflict is miscommunication. It’s such an annoying trope especially when they’re grown adults and literally live together. as readers we see both POVs and we KNOW they love each other and their bond is so strong that they’d follow each other even in death yet they can’t sit down and have one real conversation
They always run away before anything actually happens and it’s getting frustrating. I’m scared that once it hits like chapter 30 or 36 they’re gonna drag this miscommunication soooo bad and it’s gonna make people drop it.
Honest review of the story so far…
It’s actually really good. I love love the art and the vibes. You can tell the artist really took their time with their research and tried to include representation which I really appreciate. It started off really good
but I’m not gonna lie, I don’t like that the main conflict is miscommunication. It’s such an annoying trope especially when they’re grown adults and literally live together. as readers we see both POVs and we KNOW they love each other and their bond is so strong that they’d follow each other even in death yet they can’t sit down and have one real conversation
They always run away before anything actually happens and it’s getting frustrating. I’m scared that once it hits like chapter 30 or 36 they’re gonna drag this miscommunication soooo bad and it’s gonna make people drop it.