Sometimes I feel the plot is all over the place, which is too bad cuz I love the art.The comedic timing is very bad that it disrupts the story sometimes.. it's awkwardly written in that I wonder why put it there in the first place.Hope the artist colabs with a novel writer someday
IT WAS SOOOI GOOD IN THE BEGINNING but i think the plot changed with the art.
Sometimes I feel the plot is all over the place, which is too bad cuz I love the art.
The comedic timing is very bad that it disrupts the story sometimes.. it's awkwardly written in that I wonder why put it there in the first place.
Hope the artist colabs with a novel writer someday