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Could’ve been better

anonssi April 25, 2026 7:09 am

Before I talk about it overall, I just wanna say I don’t like that scene where the god who can absorb powers questioned the father about whether he hurt his child, like why was there blood on his hand during the flashback??? How did he even find out his son had powers?? Whatever happened, I’m just glad he’s dead.

Now overall I think the story could’ve been written better. The concept is cool, but the writing wasn’t the best. The pacing is off and everything happens way too quickly. We barely get to know the characters and they already somehow fell in love (in like 10 chapters?).

Should you read it? Why not. It isn’t the worst story to exist, but don’t expect much.

I did enjoy the comedy, and I love MC I think he’s funny, but that’s really it. I don’t have any attachment to the characters. I don’t know if it’s the characters themselves or the art, but they don’t express their emotions very well lol.

Lastly, the first obstacle in their love story was so frustrating to read because of that god of sexual assault. I honestly wish he would’ve died or at least punished instead of being let go c:

Responses
    Psycho w No name April 30, 2026 4:31 pm

    too much rape? :(

    anonssi April 30, 2026 5:21 pm
    too much rape? :( Psycho w No name

    I cant believe im forgetting the story already but it was only implied that MC was assaulted by a guy in the past and there's the 2nd ml sexually assaulting MC once or twice (most unlikeable character) but hes out of the pic in like 20 chapters